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Submitted under Poetry for May 2010 issue
Jazz
rohini | Mar 27, 2010 at 2:04 AM | Views:62

One need not know the other,

A slight mocking nod will do.

Here we are all musicians,

Unity can sometimes be so true.

 

He is all skin and bones,

The man with his torn old hat,

Sitting under a one bulb light,

The only thing that shines, his mistress in his hands and his eyes.

It's the blues darling, the sound of our souls,

It's Jazz sugar, makes even the old ones unfold.

 

The taste of the trumpet on beer soaked lips,

The feel of metal strings on ink laiden skin,

Breaths that hover over the sounds of the beats,

There're all together, all the Adams and Eves.

Point a finger in the air to wet them in the waves,

Take a naked plunge into these sinful waters,

Wash away the putrid boredom of days.

 

And then you can hear the man singing,

Every nerve fighting to break free,

To hold on to that moment, capture it in a jar,

Opened only in dark bedrooms,

When your insides are at war,

To break into pieces, fall into peace, peace oh! Peace come; drown me.

 

He balances the earth besides this lady,

Her mournful voice like the whistles of the trees,

The memories of today sharpen, more than words ever read.

It is in this time that they truly lived,

If you listen to what they say, it's the story of what we all need,

We be blessed! thus minus the worlds political entourage...

 

4 Comments
deadeye 27/Mar/2010 05:07 PM Saturday
nice, reads like a blues song.
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SaibaKataruka 28/Mar/2010 09:16 AM Sunday
Liked it. Not least because of the subject. "It's the blues darling, the sound of our souls, It's Jazz sugar, makes even the old ones unfold." lines almost sounded as if were accompanied by saxophone. I felt a disconnect towards the end though. The last 4 lines seemed to be somehow different than the rest.
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rohini 28/Mar/2010 10:47 AM Sunday
thankyou Saiba, also for catching the twist, so true about the last lines it was intentional, sort of a forced pull back to our realities.
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SaibaKataruka 30/Mar/2010 07:55 AM Tuesday
With the control displayed in the rest of the poem, should have guessed that the disconnect in last was deliberate. Knowing it makes the read more interesting.
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